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($) Embroider it on a pillow.

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But please don’t write it in an MBA essay. We originally started this blahg because we saw too many earnest MBA applicants (aka BSers) saying earnest MBA applicant things in their essays. That was nine years ago (and we’d already been reading MBA essays for many years before then). Alas, not much has changed. :-(…

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A BSer’s Journey: Round 1 Update!

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Can you believe we’re halfway through the Fall already?!??

Can you believe that Round 1 is this far along???

Can you believe that it was way back in July that we first heard from our intrepid Brave Supplicant who’s sharing his story with us?????

Nope, we can’t either!

Here’s an update on app strategy, approach, and (yay!!) progress made so far for our reapplicant friend!

If you missed his first episode, you can check it out here.

Episode 2: Progress in Round 1!!

 

Disclaimer: The content produced for this series was provided as a contribution to the EssaySnark blahg in exchange for free EssaySnark consulting services. The BSer created this report on his own. All opinion, advice, and ideas are his — though we recognize quite a bit of our own coaching advice coming through!!! 😉 For anyone new to this process who wants to learn the strongest techniques for presenting yourself in your essays as he has described, we’d suggest looking into our App Accelerators for guidance. We also have to caution against submitting to that many schools if this is your first season of apps and especially if Round 2 is your first round. However, we have to commend him on the approach to school research!! EVERYONE can benefit from that.

($) Look back over your life

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Writing essays may be akin to navel-gazing. You need to understand who you are and where you’ve come from. One of the most difficult parts of writing many essays is coming up with the “lessons learned” out of a story. Schools like Tuck and Kellogg specifically ask you what you learned from an experience. It’s…

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($) Lessons learned in essays: “This experience taught me…”

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Ah those well-meaning BSers. They’re always trying to say the right thing in their essays. Here’s a snippet of an essay that we get all the time: When I started being a better listener, and not being so assertive with my opinions, I started realizing that my teammates were guided by different values and experiences….

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($) When you’re asked to identify a weakness

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We covered this last year in the context of interviewing in our post “Don’t be fake” and today we’re going to drill down into it again, since a perennial angle on many schools’ MBA essay questions is an angle asking about strengths and weaknesses. That typically comes up not as a direct question, but instead…

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essay critique: HBS essay 2 “done better”

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You know the question: “Tell us about something you wish you had done better.” You get 400 words to lay it down. This is what one Brave Supplicant offered up: September 15th, 2009 was the worst day of my life. Two months after his pancreatic cancer diagnosis, my father was back in the hospital to…

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