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($) essay critique: HBS “What more would you like us to know?” (military candidate)

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We have gotten a few more submissions recently for consideration for freebie discussion here on the blahg and we hope to get to all of them in the next week or two! This one came in for Harvard accompanied by this message: ES, I’m looking for a reality check on my HBS essay! I’m most…

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($) “Is this an accomplishment?” plus a mini-rant in response to a question about Yale’s commitment essay

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We had a BSer ask us about being vegetarian last year during our work in their Complete Essay Package — it’s something that means a lot to this person and they were wondering if it would serve as an accomplishment? They were also worried if it would be a turn-off to the adcom. They were…

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($) essay critique: Kellogg “recent and meaningful leader”

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One of those “Hey EssaySnark gimme some help and do it for free!” requests came in the other day and we were like, “PEOPLE DON’T YOU KNOW THAT THE DEADLINES ARE HERE?!??” We really don’t have time to do these free reviews right now. We’re kinda busy supporting all you Brave Supplicants who are actually…

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($) “How do I pick my best leadership example to write about?” (Kellogg “meaningful leader” essay)

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A Brave Supplicant working on the Kellogg essay asking you to talk about “a recent and meaningful leadership experience” asked us this question recently: Hi ES, How do I know what’s my best leadership story? Leadership is bringing about change, measured through impact, right? Any impactful story that I have might have at work in…

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($) essay critique! A “significant leadership” story for Tuck or Kellogg

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There’s this feature of the EssaySnark blahg where we will allow you to submit your essay for a possible freebie review right here on the website – out in the open, where everyone can see, and hopefully benefit, from the things that you could be improving. There’s this unfortunate habit of Brave Supplicants who are…

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($) Breathless bloat and gloat can backfire.

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This is most frequently an issue with the older MBA applicant though we see it across the board. You’ve been involved in some high-profile projects. You have a sense that the adcoms want to hear about “impact.” You combine those two into an essay that talks about how “we helped millions of people by launching…

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($) Why telling the truth in your apps is important.

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This post is part of a series: “What are ethics?” “Real life examples of ethics (that are not boring)” “Ethics is a critical part of leadership” “Personal ethics in business: Where will you draw the line?”   We don’t often encounter BSers who outright lie in their apps but we know that it does happen….

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