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($) essay critique! Kellogg “a time you have demonstrated leadership”

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We’ve got this thing where anyone can submit an essay for consideration for a freebie review here on the blahg and look! Someone submitted one! And they did so before it was too late for us to look at it before deadlines! This is for Kellogg essay 2 whose question is: Kellogg’s purpose is to…

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($) Essay Critique! Yale “biggest commitment”

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A couple weeks ago a brave Brave Supplicant sent in a Yale SOM draft for us to look at for review here on the blahg — and here it is! Thank you to this BSer for doing so, especially for doing it so early in the season when it’s going to be most helpful to…

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($) essay critique! Tuck short and long-term goals / why MBA / why Tuck

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About a month ago, this essay was submitted for consideration for a freebie blahg review by an Indian BSer who’s applying to Tuck (or possibly he already submitted in their November round? Not sure; if so, we got it much too late to turn it around that quickly 🙁 ). This BSer is in investment…

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($) essay critique! Kellogg “demonstrated leadership and created lasting value”

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Another submission under our attempt-for-a-freebie-review program came in: Just discovered EssaySnark but love the work you do. Genuinely mean it, not sucking up. Have submitted my comprehensive review to you (which is due tomorrow). Meanwhile, request you to kindly provide high level feedback / public critique of my Kellogg essay. Have spent quite some time…

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($) essay critique: Ross career goals!

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Hi EssaySnark, I am currently applying to Michigan Ross and I was hoping you can help review my 2nd Essay before the deadline tomorrow. Best, [BSer] Doh! Yeah, sorry, never gonna happen, not even under the very best of circumstances like right now where there are very few deadlines hitting each week. We simply need…

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($) essay critique! Storytelling and the Darden MBA essay: “A time when your opinion evolved”

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We’re still in catch-up mode, cleaning out the piles of junk mail sitting on the kitchen counter, sorting through the mounds of laundry that piled up in the corner, trying not to forget to pick up the dry cleaning when we’re out doing errands, and working diligently to knock out all the less-urgent but still-important…

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($) essay critique: LBS Career Goals (part 2 – finally!)

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Well that took awhile!! Back in June, we posted the Part One of a career goals essay for London Business School, saying we’d come back and finish the discussion. This happened, and then that happened, and then soon enough we were knee-deep in essays, and, well…. here we are. At least we didn’t forget completely…

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($) essay critique! Columbia essay 1 and an edtech career

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Now that everyone is solidly in essay-writing mode around here, let’s look at another actual essay! This came in a few weeks ago through our Try your hand! Spin the wheel! See if you win a prize! feature where you can submit an essay for consideration of review here on the blahg. This is what…

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($) essay critique! MIT Sloan cover letter

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Today we’re talking about MIT and their “cover letter” which is not really an essay but yeah it’s an essay. These are the instructions from MIT: MIT Sloan seeks students whose personal characteristics demonstrate that they will make the most of the incredible opportunities at MIT, both academic and non-academic. We are on a quest…

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($) essay critique: HBS “What more would you like us to know?” (military candidate)

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We have gotten a few more submissions recently for consideration for freebie discussion here on the blahg and we hope to get to all of them in the next week or two! This one came in for Harvard accompanied by this message: ES, I’m looking for a reality check on my HBS essay! I’m most…

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