Sometimes we come up with some good shizzle when writing feedback to poor hapless BSers in our critiques of their essays.
Along with our oft-repeated advice of you have to answer the question and you can’t contribute just by being there, we recently came up with a metaphor that seemed pretty useful.
Or at least, writing it seemed useful. No idea if the recipient of the metaphor thought that it was.
We’re offering it to all of you today, in case you’re wondering how to handle the Wharton essay 1 prompt about “what will you gain”.
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