For NYU Stern — and a number of schools — being able to articulate why you want the MBA, based on what you want to do with it after you graduate, is critical to getting the attention of your admissions reader.
One of you readers of this here blahg has written an essay to do exactly that! And, they sent it in to see if we would take a look and let them know how they did on it. Today we’ll tell them! And you! And, if you have an essay you might want to get us to look at, too — for free! — then you can read how that works and see if you want to do it. No promises on the timing of when we might be able to post, but we do try to get to all of these submissions.
For today’s essay, it’s written for this prompt from NYU:
What are your short and long-term career goals? How will the MBA help you achieve them?
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Want more essay critiques? Here’s the ‘snarchive of all previous ones posted on the blahg — about 125 of them! Want more NYU Stern advice? Our SnarkStrategies MBA Application Guide for NYU Stern has bunch of it! Want help on your NYU Stern goals essay? Our Single Shot Express Essay Decimator gets you fast-turnaround feedback on one draft!