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($) essay critique: Booth “who you are” essay

July 22, 2020 by EssaySnark - Discusses Chicago Booth Leave a Comment

Thank you to the brave Brave Supplicant who sent in this essay for a freebie review here on the blahg! You too can toss your essay into the ring if you’re similarly brave!! Today’s essay is for Chicago Booth and their question that goes like this:

An MBA is as much about personal growth as it is about professional development. In addition to sharing your experience and goals in terms of career, we’d like to learn more about you outside of the office. Use this opportunity to tell us something about who you are…

It’s great that BSers are getting essays together! In this pandemic world, it seems like time has gotten very fluid, with this odd consistency like this summer is going to last forever… but it won’t! The days are marching past, and August is almost here, and if you’re not yet getting your first drafts for your first school together, well, you’ll need to get on it!

Here’s what this diligent Brave Supplicant has submitted for EssaySnark’s commentary…


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Thank you to this bravest of Brave Supplicants for sending in their essay for this review. We hope it was helpful, to them and also to all of you who are looking for ways to get motivated. You should feel inspired by the strong work that your peer-BSer has put in — we know you can get there too! There’s plenty of time to construct excellent essays in time for Round 1. Maybe NOW is the right time for to get started? 🙂

Did you find these remarks to be useful? If so, the very best way to get help with YOUR Booth essays — personalized, private, and significantly more detailed than this? Our Essay Decimator Essay Review service! We go into a detailed discussion specific to your responses and how you’re doing answering the question in full, to point out where you’re making a good argument — or if you’re not. We help you see how a complete stranger might experience your presentation of content, where it’s too high level, where it’s confusing, where it goes off the rails — and we offer input on what works, and what might need to change.

Our Booth Essay Guide is also under development; the 2019 version is still very useful, particularly since the first essay question is the same as last season.

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We wish this BSer best of luck — based on what they shared of their profile, plus the good work we’ve already seen that they are capable of, and that they’re ready with drafts before July is out… We’re betting that they will end up landing at a good bschool this year!!!
 
 

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