November 25, 2019: Some of you have been a little anxious lately – and a few have been outright discouraged based on how Round 1 has unfolded for you. So we thought we’d resurrect this Success Story post from the ‘snarchives to share with all of you today. This is a first-hand account from a BSer Who Came Before. It was first published in January 2013, so this person has not only seen successes in admissions, but in completions, and has ridden off into the new-career sunset many moons ago. The words of wisdom still resonate though! Hopefully this is useful to you.
From a former BSer…
My journey began at the end of the summer in 2011. I turned 26, and decided to start taking life a bit more seriously. I was doing pretty well in my career, but wasn’t happy with my industry, or function (IT is pretty boring if you aren’t passionate about it). It was time to finally pursue the job I had coveted since I was in high school, the job a guy coming out of a no name school in Boston with an average GPA just couldn’t land; I was going to figure out a way to become a Brand Manager at a top CPG.
My research began with informational interviews (drinks at a bar) with friends of friends who were currently living the dream. Brand Managers come from a variety of backgrounds, but it was clear that an MBA was my most direct route… so, I began to study for that wonderful test…
3 attempts and 6 months later I was over 700 (with a lowish quant score) and ready to move on from that sick torture.
The GMAT was by far the hardest part of the application process.
The Winter and Spring of 2012 was full of campus visits, boards, blogs (and blahgs), horrible webinars, and awkward MBA fairs. I made list after list of schools… countless excel sheets comparing my stats vs averages at schools, and finally came out with 8 to focus on, two top 8s, four top 15s, one top 25, and one top 50. 5 to target in round one (did I mention I was getting married that September, and also had a 10 day honeymoon planned), and three in round 2. I was overwhelmed and unclear about my chances, so I used EssaySnark’s Comprehensive Profile Review. During this helpful back and forth, where I was told that I was crazy, unfocused, and… crazy, I whittled that number down to 3. One top 8, and two top 15s…
Figuring out which schools to apply to was by far the hardest part of the application process.
With three schools I knew pretty much everything about, and truly wanted to go to, I was ready to begin writing. Over the next 2 months I got married, housed out of town family for a week, went on my honeymoon, moved, and wrote the best essays of my life. I had my sister and friend review my essays, and both ripped them apart. They were a huge help in the process due to their honesty. After spending every free minute on essays (including mornings in a coffee shop during my honeymoon…) I hit submit. I truly poured my heart out in those essays, and feel that my passion for each program, and a clear vision for my future is what got me interviews.
Writing essays was by far the hardest part of this process.
I ended up interviewing at all three schools, invited at the top 15s, and self-initiated at the top 8. The top 8 was my first, and went horribly… I just wasn’t ready. I was just intimidated by the process. The second interview went pretty well, and the third went spectacularly.
Interviewing wasn’t the hardest; I actually really enjoyed this part…
Then began the waiting… I take back everything I said before; waiting for decisions is by far the hardest part of this process. My outcome, Dinged at the top 8, Waitlisted at one top 15, and Accepted at the other! All in all, I’m pretty happy!
I was successful in my process, not because of stats, but because I had a clear goal, was genuinely passionate about my fit within the programs I chose, and completely conveyed these things in my essays and at least one of my interviews.
My advice, be truthful with yourself. Do not fully buy into free profile reviews by admission consultants trolling boards. I had a variety of suggestions, from targeting Wharton/Booth to going after only regional top 50, which confused the hell out of me. Only take advice on targets from those that have a full understanding of your profile, goals, and personality… Without those things their educated guesses are just stabs in the dark. Also, learn as much as you can about every school you apply to, and only apply to programs you are genuinely interested in.
Applying to B-school is one of the hardest (self-inflicted) things you’ll ever experience in your lifetime… Don’t give up. The GMAT sucks, there are too many choices when it comes to schools, introspective essays make you doubt everything you’ve done, interviews are super stressful, and waiting makes you doubt everything all over again. In the end, one way or another, it’ll be worth it. You’ll either have a much better vision of who you are, and what you want to do with your life, or you’ll be heading to a top business school and be well on your way to accomplishing your goals. Good luck!
NOTES FROM WHEN WE ORIGINALLY PUBLISHED THIS BACK IN 2013: When EssaySnark heard about this BSer’s admit recently, we were like, “Whoa, you actually got your apps in?” We hadn’t heard much back after we did the Profile Review back in August. And here’s why we like that: Resourcefulness. Independence. Do-it-yourselfness, which we really respect. Plus, impressiveness, that he managed to a) get married, and b) stay married, and simultaneously do multiple apps!!
This was like when you’re pulled off the side of the road in some beautiful spot taking pictures, and along comes a dude on a bicycle, all disheveled and a little wild-eyed and he’s clearly been riding awhile, and he’s like, “Hey” and you’re like, “Dude” and he’s like, “Where am I?” and you’re like, “You look a little lost” and he’s like “No I’m just trying to get somewhere” and you’re like, “Maybe you want to go that way” and he’s like, “Cool” and pedals on past you and you’re like, “Are you sure you’re OK” calling after him and he sort of grunts and then he’s gone and so you take some more pictures of the sunset which is really beautiful and then you go about your life but you always wonder what happened to the guy.
And then you find out that he ended up somewhere REALLY COOL on that bicycle that’s pretty much EXACTLY WHERE HE WANTED TO GO and you’re like, “Wow, I’m glad I was there at the side of the road that day!” ‘cuz he probably woulda made it SOMEWHERE after all but you like to think that maybe you helped out a tiny smidgeon that he got somewhere SPECIAL.
Basically, it’s just cool to hear that someone took the Profile Review and turned it into a strategy map like this, and then executed. CONGRATULATIONS to you, former BSer!!!
Here's what others have said about this:
What a great story! Gives hope to people like us, who are more than just a GPA or a GMAT. Absolutely agree on the free consultation bit. I took one where the consultant advised I’d be a good fit for Wharton. Once I signed up for a review, she changed her tone to top 50.
Yeah consultants are all over the place these days!
I think if you have a network in the forums and if you have such awesome stuffs at incredible prices (blahg membership) why would need a consultant anyway?
I have been fortunate enough to interact with around 10 people who got in top 10 schools. None of them used a consultant. One used an essay editor and 3 of them asked essaysnark to take a look at their essays.
Yes! So I ditched that person too and stuck with ES for any editing. Lesson learned. You really don’t need a ‘consultant’.
“wrote the best essays of my life. I had my sister and friend review my essays, and both ripped them apart. ”
I think its a very important thing to have people supporting you in the application process.
And great “bicycle guy” addon 🙂
BTW I really wonder why his wife did not get to read those essays?
Perhaps writing them in the coffee shops during the honeymoon had something to do with it?
“BTW I really wonder why his wife did not get to read those essays?
Perhaps writing them in the coffee shops during the honeymoon had something to do with it?”
Ha, not every woman would put up with their husband waking up every morning at 6am on their honeymoon to write essays, but thats why I married her! She puts up with me :-).
My wife was actually the most important part of this process. She did re-read all of my essays a few times, but I had to turn to others for real revisions. She was just a bit too connected to the process to rip into my essays and humiliate me…But, I bounced just about every idea off of her. Without her support, I doubt I would have made it.
Also, agreed great bicycle guy analogy.
Yeah you are right.
A very wise man once said “You might want people to review your essays who do not know as much as your best friends do”. Because thats what the adcom will be like.
Great stuffs man 🙂
It scares me that I knew this story was yours, highwyre…haha. We’re way too addicted to this crap. 🙂