($) essay critique: HBS “What more would you like us to know?” (military candidate)

August 15, 2017 by EssaySnark - Discusses Harvard

We have gotten a few more submissions recently for consideration for freebie discussion here on the blahg and we hope to get to all of them in the next week or two! This one came in for Harvard accompanied by this message: ES, I’m looking for a reality check on my HBS essay! I’m most…

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