EssaySnark

  • about
  • contact
  • help
  • sign up
  • login
CLICK FOR MORE!
  • Essay Questions
    • Harvard
    • Stanford
    • Wharton
    • Chicago Booth
    • Kellogg
    • MIT Sloan
    • Tuck
    • NYU Stern
    • Columbia
    • Yale SOM
    • Berkeley Haas
    • UVA Darden
    • Duke Fuqua
    • Michigan Ross
    • UCLA Anderson
    • Cornell
  • Strategy Guides
    • MBA Reapplicant Guide
    • Pitching Entrepreneurship as Your Post-MBA Career
    • Applying to European Business Schools
    • School-Specific MBA Application Guides
      • Harvard 2022 MBA Strategy Guide
      • Stanford 2022 MBA Strategy Guide
      • Wharton 2022 MBA Strategy Guide
      • Kellogg 2022 MBA Strategy Guide
      • Chicago Booth 2022 MBA Strategy Guide
      • Columbia 2022 MBA Strategy Guide
      • *MORE SCHOOL-SPECIFIC GUIDES HERE*
  • MBA Consulting
    • Free essay reviews
    • What stage are you in?
    • Military MBA
    • Testimonials & Reviews
  • My SnarkCenter
    • My Strategy Guides
    • My Favorite Posts

Don’t be satisfied with fools’ gold

August 4, 2016 by EssaySnark Leave a Comment

When you’re starting out the process of writing an essay, you will encounter many possible ideas for what to say in response to the prompt that the adcom has served out.

Don’t settle for the first one.

Sure, maybe that first thing you thought of is “it.” Maybe you immediately latched onto the One True Answer for the question that the adcom is asking.

That happens sometimes.

But not often.

Typically what happens is that people think up some thought of what the essay should be about, and they’re off to the races. They write and they write and because the words flowed so well, they are convinced that they’ve done a good job. That it’s a good essay. That it answers the question. That it reveals something significant and meaningful about themselves in the context of their candidacy for business school.

More often than not, they’re wrong.

The trick is not to stop too early.

Many people surface one idea and they are so pleased with themselves that an idea actually came, that they don’t stop to consider that that may have been only a shard.

They are off and running, clutching this tiny little speck of an idea close to the chest, not realizing that they left behind the Mother Lode of ideas, a whole treasure trove of glittering gems lurking just beneath the surface.

What’s especially sad is when a BSer finds fools’ gold and thinks it’s the real thing. They mistake it for an authentic answer.

The brain is not to be trusted in this process. The brain wants to satisfy you. You pose a problem to it, and it says “Ouch you’re making me think don’t do that! Here! Take this and go away, don’t stress me out like this!” And it serves up some idea, because you’ve demanded it to.

What we do without being conscious at all of the process is, we look for the “right” answer, the one that we think will impress the adcom, the one we believe they want us to say, and we go with that.

If you don’t question it, then you’ll assume that that first answer is perfect and awesome.

And, maybe it is. Or maybe it’s just the knee-jerk reflex answer that your brain tossed out to make you stop taxing it so with this thinking-work.

What we’re proposing is, don’t settle. Don’t assume that the answer that came easy is the best one you can come up with. Push back on that weasly little brain of yours. Make it earn its keep for once. Yes, thinking of things to write about is taxing. But guess what? That “thinking” thing is what the adcoms are expecting of you. That’s where you have the greatest opportunity to distinguish yourself among the masses of other applicants.

When you settle for the first thing you think of, you may be cheating yourself of the true gold mine that’s waiting for you.

The adcoms are quite good appraisers of authenticity.

All that glitters is not gold, my friend.

Don’t let that brain of yours cheat you out of finding the good stuff.

Filed Under: writing essays Tagged With: authenticity

« Previous: From the Snark-ives: Reapplicants
Next: Reapplicant Success Story! A BSer gives the GSB another go a year later. »

So who the heck is EssaySnark, anyway?!

We're the snarky experts in MBA admissions!

Sometimes amused and often appalled by what candidates write in their MBA applications to top bschools, EssaySnark created this little blahg to share common mistakes. Learn from them and avoid making admissions directors laugh (or want to hurl) when they read your essays. If you are hoping to have your essay reviewed anonymously on the blahg for free, submit it for consideration.

Want EssaySnark's personal assistance with your MBA applications? Start with our menu of consulting services and please read the Help FAQ to learn how we operate. Still have questions after doing all that? Email Team EssaySnark at gethelpnow at essaysnark dot com.

Good luck on your apps, Brave Supplicant!

Tell us what you think. Cancel reply

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *

Sign up for the 'Snark via email

Enter your address to get weekday blahg posts by email.

UPCOMING MBA APP DEADLINES

  • INSEAD Jan '24 Intake Rd 2
    in 2 weeks
  • INSEAD Jan '24 Intake Rd 3
    in 2 months, 3 weeks
  • INSEAD Jan '24 Intake Rd 4
    in 4 months, 0 weeks
   
   

CLASS OF 2025 MBA APPLICATION STRATEGY GUIDES

From a former BSer:
"love the guide books!"




    The 2022 Stanford MBA Application Guide - for "what matters most" in your MBA application!
SnarkStrategies Guide for Stanford GSB for the Class of 2025
   
    The 2022 Harvard MBA Application Guide - updated for the Class of 2025!
SnarkStrategies Guide for Harvard Business School!
   
  The 2022 Wharton MBA Application Guide - even more advice on how to get to a win with those essays!
SnarkStrategies Guide for The Wharton School - with clear guidance for the 2022 essays!
   
  The 2022-2023 Columbia MBA Application Guide
SnarkStrategies Guide for Columbia Business School for 2022-2023 applications
   
    The 2022 MIT Essay Guide covers the org chart, the cover letter and 'introduce yourself' video, plus the new optional short-answer question on "the world you come from" -- and everything else you need to know!
SnarkStrategies Guide for MIT Sloan MBA - totally revised for the Class of 2025!
   
    The 2022 Kellogg Essay Guide - with a full methodology to identify your 'lasting impact' and your 'values'
SnarkStrategies Guide for Kellogg MBA - revised for 2022!
   
    The 2022 UVA Darden MBA Application Guide gives insights on the essays, Early Action, the possibility of a test waiver, and everything else going on here!
SnarkStrategies Guide for the Darden MBA - updated for the Class of 2025 requirements!
   
   
The Yale SOM MBA Application Guide for Class of 2025 candidates!
SnarkStrategies Guide for Yale SOM - updated for 2022
   
    The 2022 Berkeley-Haas MBA Application Guide - updated for the Class of 2025 application!
SnarkStrategies Guide for Berkeley Haas - refreshed and updated, with brainstorming exercises and structured maps to help you focus your stories!
   
    The 2022-2023 NYU Stern MBA Application Guide that covers the essays, the EQ Endorsement and test strategies!
SnarkStrategies Guide for NYU - discusses your requirements for the Class of 2025 essays!
       
   
   
Get started now - without doing any work! The Comprehensive Profile Review will help you start your strategy for your MBA applications.


EssaySnark® is a registered trademark. All content copyright © 2010–2023 Snarkolicious Press · Privacy Policy