essay critique: Kellogg career goals

November 2, 2011 by EssaySnark - Discusses Kellogg

We haven’t done an essay critique in some time (and probably some of you Brave Supplicants gave up on us completely). Even though this one surely was submitted in Rd 1, we’re offering it up here in the hopes that our comments may be of benefit to the BSer who sent it over to us,…

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Str1der says

November 2, 2011 at 2:00 pm

Excellent critique – really drills down to what the problems are here. I too have submitted an essay for a critique and hopefully the snark shall rip it apart (or not) here soon. Cheers!
Dan V says

November 3, 2011 at 12:39 am

good stuff as always. Essay Snark. Please don't forget about this blog during the 30 days. Not slighting the 30 days blog, it is a good idea but this blog is amazing and beneficial too!
ccatcher says

November 3, 2011 at 10:47 am

I second 🙂
essaysnark says

November 3, 2011 at 2:36 pm

Uh — people? What does it look like we're doing? Sheesh! 🙂