You’re not the only one who struggles to put together clear sentences.
Case in point, we offer this from an article on
how we’re totally doomed plankton in the ocean:
From the article:
An Edinburgh-based research team fears plankton, the tiny organisms that sustain life in our seas, has all but been wiped out after spending two years collecting water samples from the Atlantic.
You likely can figure it out just fine, but if you’re like EssaySnark, it may have taken a re-read or two.
Before we talk about what’s wrong with this, why not take a minute studying it for yourself, to see if you can spot what’s off here?
(Scroll down when you’re ready….)